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there you go
lighting matches in the rain,
walking with two feet
that the gods gave you
because they cannot walk,

heading home as if with news
of some miraculous disaster,

counting the steps between yourself
and the clouds that disappeared
behind the grey veil of October.

thunder and lightning unfold
so close above

and you dream of a destination
somewhere in the south

where birds and stormy weather coexist.

behind you there is nothing,
running water will erase
every footprint you have left
on the dark sand of this metropolis.

before you there is distance,
enough to live your life
in a constant state of travel,

but not nearly enough signs
for you to know
where you are heading.

close your eyes
as not to be blinded
by the red lights and the yellow warnings,
those ever changing speed limits,

and open your arms
as to be looked at by the sun

that will soon peek out behind the nothingness,

ripping the veil
of the vast, unending
cobweb sky.
here's a nice piece.
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Because we need not rush into the new year; on commuting with no hurry by ~chapaV is written with a fondness towards the realization about the distance behind and in front of us. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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Kuhane-chan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
I REMEMBER this one.
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chapaV Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Professional Writer
Back in the day, girl!
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
:worship: Hello! This wonderful piece of yours has been featured here: [link]
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PaniCrusnik09 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
I'm humbled. So eloquent, so precise, so resonant. I adore this piece. My utmost thanks for sharing it with us.
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Violet-Minds Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
fucking brilliant.
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this :)
I envy this
But I'm glad you made this :D

" there you go lighting matches in the rain, walking with two feet that the gods gave you because they cannot walk"- perfect lines. Simply beautiful.
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Congrats on the DD! (:
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ocean-whispers Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013   Writer
Beautiful. I really enjoyed:

behind you there is nothing,
running water will erase
every footprint you have left
on the dark sand of this metropolis.


It's an absolutely lovely piece overall.
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EgoSlayer Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
I absolutely love the verse starting with "before you there is distance" and the verse right after it.
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doublethefun Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
beautiful
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